The Appointment Written by Danno Nell |
Copyright © 2001-2002 J. Daniel Nell FADE IN: INT. PROFESSIONAL OFFICE -- AFTERNOON - Montage - Of dolly shots revealing AWARDS, DIPLOMA's, SPECIAL PICTURES, etc. intermixed with: EXT. CITY STREET/BUSINESS DISTRICT -- AFTERNOON - Montage - (cont.) Shots of life outside this office, such as, three "suspects" sitting on the curb with hands handcuffed behind their backs, a man and woman in a heated argument, two gang members in the midst of a fight, etc. EXT. FRONT OF SMALL DOWNTOWN OFFICE -- CONTINUOUS A Modest section of retail/office space on a downtown street where a TRANSIENT stands quietly holding a SIGN "stranded, need $25 GOD BLESS". ANGLE ON YELLOW CAB which swiftly pulls to the curb. Without hesitation, the rear door opens and out steps NICOLE, a well dressed business women (turtleneck & Long pants) who has a cell phone surgically attached to her ear.. NICOLE No I'm here now (beat) But this is not going to take more than a few minutes. From her satchel, Nicole pulls a $20 and hands it to the cabby and moves on; The cabby seems pleases with the renumeration, he smiles and drives off. Heading towards the entrance to the office, Nicole's eyes lock on the SIGN loosely grasped by the transient, who stands between her and her destination. NICOLE (CONT'D) Yes, I know it's an hour appointment, but I can accomplish in 15 minutes what it takes most people an hour to do. Stopping directly in front of the man, Nicole doesn't hesitate to snatch the sign from the man and take a closer look. Speechless the Transient's jaw drops. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 2. Copyright © 2002 NICOLE (CONT'D) Besides, I've got the Henderson appointment in (looking at watch) 56 minutes and I'm not going to be late. Diving back into her bag, Nicole stuffs the sign inside and pulls out 2 bills, ANGLE ON a $20 & $5 that Nicole pulls from her satchel and places in the Transients hand. With that Nicole moves on. ANGLE ON the Transient who seems confused, although a smile quickly comes to his face as he looks back at Nicole. NICOLE (CONT'D) No, don't push anything off until tomorrow, (beat) Now I'm going inside, I'll call when I get out. Nicole hangs up the phone and enters the office INT. PROFESSIONAL OFFICE -- CONTINUOUS A modest professional office, complete with couch, coffee table, magazines and JANICE, a retirement age woman, who's warm smile invites even the coldest person to feel welcome. Janice, the office secretary, pears at a computer screen through fragile glasses, which sit atop the end of her nose, as she types on the keyboard. JANICE (not looking up) Can I help you? Nicole sizes up the place. NICOLE I have a noon appointment with Dr. Bradshaw, (pause, no response) I'm kinda short on time, so if you could just let him know I am here. Janice stops typing and gazes over her glasses at Nicole. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 3. Copyright © 2002 JANICE (hesitation) Dr. Bradshaw always begins on time, (focus returns to the computer) Your group is through the door. Nicole takes a few steps towards the door, then NICOLE Did you say group? JANICE Yes dear, they're through the door, you can go on in. NICOLE (with attitude) Wait a minute, I'm suppose to be meeting with Dr. Bradshaw, not with a group of people. Not even looking at Nicole, Janice finishes typing, takes off her glasses and goes to the door. Quietly she opens the door and slips inside, closing the door behind. Nicole patiently fidgets, periodically looking at her watch, a long moment passes before.... Janice reappears from the office and sits back down, returning to work. A moment passes.... NICOLE (CONT'D) (angrily) What is going on here, where is Doctor.... ANGLE ON the door to the Doctors office opens and a middle aged professionally dressed woman appears. DR. BRADSHAW Mrs. Warner? Nicole is a little taken back and unsure what is going on. DR. BRADSHAW (CONT'D) (extending hand) Hi, I'm Dr. Bradshaw. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 4. Copyright © 2002 NICOLE (looking at Janice) There must be some mistake, (beat) I had a 12 o'clock appointment with a Dr. Ray Bradshaw, (to Dr. Bradshaw) And it is not for a group wine session. Dr. Bradshaw takes it in stride... DR. BRADSHAW (smiling) I know the name sometimes confuses people, but I assure you I am that person and you are scheduled for our 12 o'clock group session. NICOLE Look, I don't need therapy, and I'm certainly not going to pay to listen to others problems, (beat, gathers her thought) Okay, I just need a letter stating that I'm okay to go back to work, (beat) So just write me out a little letter saying that you saw me and I am not going to go kill anybody and I pay you for the whole hour. Nicole laid her cards on the table and waits for a response DR. BRADSHAW (smiling, extending her hand) I apologize for wasting your time Mrs. Warner, (beat) I took you on as a favor to an old friend and can see that that was a mistake, now I have to get back to the group, please see yourself out. Dr. Bradshaw turns and retreats back to her patients, leaving Nicole to hang out and dry... NICOLE Did what I think just happen, happen? Janice looks up at Nicole with a look of "What are you still doing here". Nicole looks at her watch ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 5. Copyright © 2002 NICOLE (CONT'D) I do not believe this. Nicole storms out of the Office EXT. PROFESSIONAL OFFICE -- CONTINUOUS The street is much as it was before except the Transient is now gone. Nicole comes flying out of the office, takes a few steps and stops, gives it a second thought, then turns around walk to the door, grabs the door handle, gives it a third thought, stomps her foot, turns and walks away, again she stops, this time throws a little tantrum INT. PROFESSIONAL OFFICE -- MOMENTS LATER The office is as it was only moments ago, Janice still types away. A moment passes... Nicole enters from outside, walks across the office and through the door in which Dr. Bradshaw disappeared only moments before, slamming it behind her. ANGLE ON Janice who continues to go about her business, as a smile slowly appears INT. DR.'S OFFICE -- CONTINUOUS A standard shrink's office, with 5 chairs in an arch replacing any comfortable chair or couch. At the head of the arch sits our good Dr. Bradshaw. The office is decorated with all of the pictures and plaques that were in the opening montage. In front of the door stands Nicole, who is now on center stage. Every eye in the room is trained on her. A moment of silence passes before.... DR. BRADSHAW Mark? Please continue The groups focus returns to MARK, while Dr. Bradshaw glances back at Nicole. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 6. Copyright © 2002 ANGLE ON MARK is 45 year old teddy bear, large in stature, a little gruffy looking, but sweet as can be. Mark looks emotionally drained, like he hasn't slept in 2 weeks. MARK (shyly) Okay, well again my name is Mark Hess, I'm a Battalion Chief with the 13th fire house. (beat) I've been a fireman for 26, (beat) ANGLE ON Nicole, who finds an empty chair along the wall where she sits down. MARK (CONT'D) My dad was a fireman for 31 years, me and my brother are both fire fighters. (beat) I even married the chiefs daughter, and my only son just became a fireman at the 12th fire house. Dr. Bradshaw again looks at Nicole who body language tells the whole story, legs crossed and arms folded, she is very closed and distant from the rest of the group. MARK (CONT'D) (beat) I don't really know much else. DR. BRADSHAW Thank you Mark, (beat) Jenny? Would like to go next. JENNY is a soft looking 20 year old, petite and almost fragile, she bears the marks of a battered spouse, both physically and emotionally. JENNY (nodding) I'm Jenny Presc (catching herself) Miller, I'll be 20 tomorrow DEVIN (O.S.) (smoothly) Happy Birthday ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 7. Copyright © 2002 ANGLE ON DEVIN, an 18 year old, who's attire properly reflects that he is a High School Varsity Football Player; Who's as attractive as he is built, and he is used to getting the girls. Devin has a line of stitches above his right eye, about 2 inches long This dialog is meant to show Devin's immaturity, and to build up his "Macho manliness" JENNY (smiling, to Devin) I'm a single mom, (proudly) I have a two year old boy, (beat) And we are staying over at the women's shelter. Devin quickly looks away and slides back into his seat, realizing the blunder he has made. JENNY (CONT'D) (back at group) I am working on getting into the community college this spring, I want to become a social worker and help people. Jenny sits back and folds her arms. DR. BRADSHAW Thank you Jenny, (Beat) Devin now would you like to share? Devin's entire body language changes, sitting forward, he becomes very animated and "In control". DEVIN Well what can I say? I'm the star quarterback at South High, we're number one in our division, (cheering) Go Cougars! NICOLE (laughing) Dr. Bradshaw looks at Nicole with a look of disapproval NICOLE (CONT'D) (quietly) Sorry. DR. BRADSHAW (to Devin) What about your family? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 8. Copyright © 2002 DEVIN Well, I'm the middle of 7 children, I've got three older brothers and three younger sisters, that's about it (beat) Oh yeah, I've also got a dog (pointing both fingers) Butch! Devin again slides back into his seat. DR. BRADSHAW Thank you Devin (beat, to everyone) Now that everyone has had the chance to get to know a little about everyone else, is there anyone who would like to share why they are here today? Silence fills the room as each person waits for another to volunteer JENNY I'll start DR. BRADSHAW Thank you Jenny. Courageously Jenny continues JENNY Well it's probably no secret why I'm here, (beat) It's kind of hard to hide the fact that I've been used as a punching bag. Jenny begins to hide her face with her hand, but musters up the courage to face what has happened to her and pulls her hands down. JENNY (CONT'D) Me and Johnny met the first day of High school, everyone knew we would get married someday. (beat) We were always really careful, but after two years together, I became pregnant (beat) We knew things would be tough, being as young as we were, but we loved (MORE) ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 9. Copyright © 2002 JENNY (CONT'D) each other so much. Gradually things became worse (beat) He hit me the first time when I was two months pregnant, but he was really sorry, I mean, he begged for me to forgive him, (beat) I had never seen him like that before, so I didn't think it would happen again; and he was really good to me for six or seven months. (beat) Then he went out and got drunk with his friends, he said he was going to celebrate his little boy (beat) I was nine months along, my due date was two weeks away, but I went into labor that night (beat, self control) After he kicked me in the stomach for ruining his life. (beat) After the baby arrived he was really good to me. It didn't start again until about a year later when I caught him with my best friend. (beat) Jenny begins to break. JENNY (CONT'D) I left him two weeks ago after he hit our little boy, I had never hit him back until that night. (beat) All I remember was grabbing him by the collar and screaming at him (beat) I got out of the hospital 2 days ago. (half smiling) Me and my son we celebrated, because we started our new life. Dr. Bradshaw hands Jenny a kleenex and Jenny wipes away her tears. DR. BRADSHAW (solemnly) Thank you Jenny, I appreciate the courage it takes to share. (beat) Who would like to share next? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 10. Copyright © 2002 DEVIN I will. Devin is now very humble, his voice resinates in a very low tone. DR. BRADSHAW Okay. DEVIN First I'd just like to say (to Jenny) I'll be more than happy to beat the crap out of him if you'd like. Jenny smiles JENNY (shaking her head) That's okay DEVIN You just let me know, (beat, as if avoiding the subject) I'm here, I guess, because my parents though it would be a good idea for me to talk to someone Devin looses it immediately, crying profusely. However, he gains his composure rather quickly. DEVIN (CONT'D) I was involved in a car accident (fighting away the tears) I wasn't driving, Marty was, he's my best friend (beat) Paul and Mark were in the back seat, we had all been drinking (laughing) We were all pretty slammed (serious) I don't even know where we were going, but Marty reached back to smack Mark, (beat, silence) We ran a red light (beat) I don't think the old couple even knew what hit them (beat, through tears) No one told me until the next day that Marty didn't make it. (MORE) ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 11. Copyright © 2002 DEVIN (CONT'D) (beat) It should have been me not him, I was suppose to be the designated driver that night, (angrily) But I got wasted anyway, I drank twice as much as Marty, (beat) He wouldn't let me drive, and now he's dead, and I get to live with that the rest of my life. Silence fills the room. DR. BRADSHAW I had the chance to talk with Devin in our one-on-one session yesterday, and he has found a wonderful way to begin dealing with the loss of his friend, (to devin) Would you mind sharing what you told me? Devin begins to gain his composure. DEVIN Paul and Mark and myself got permission to take the two cars and build a memorial on one corner of the intersection where the accident happened, (beat) We got someone to donate a crane which we used to place one car on top of the other, then we welded them together and had a stone memorial put right in front of the vehicles that told about the accident and the people who lost their lives. Nicole still sits there closed to the emotions that the rest of the group is sharing. Looking at her watch, she shakes her head in frustration. Mark notices Nicole's disrespect and glares at her for a moment. DR. BRADSHAW Thank you very much for sharing that Devin, (upbeat) Well were about half way through our first session as a group, I think (MORE) ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 12. Copyright © 2002 DR. BRADSHAW (CONT'D) here would be a good place to take a breather. There are some refreshments on the table in the back, we'll get started again in a few minutes, so go help yourselves. Everyone somberly gets up and makes there way to the back table, while Dr. Bradshaw steps out of the office. Nicole watches everyone for a moment then pulls out her cell phone and makes a call. NICOLE (quietly) Hi, it's me (beat) Mark hears the call and again glares at Nicole, who sees Mark and just turns around. NICOLE (CONT'D) Call Henderson, tell him I will be there at quarter after, I got stuck here longer than anticipated. (beat) No, it's a group thing and the Doctor won't write the letter unless I sit thru everyone wine. Nicole has just noticed Dr. Bradshaw, who stands at the door Nicole turns back away. NICOLE (CONT'D) Just make the call Quickly she hangs up the phone. Making her way over to the table, Nicole finds a couple of broken chocolate chip cookies left and no cups. Openly frustrated, Nicole grabs a napkin and gathers up what's left of the cookies and heads back to her chair, except that her chair now sits with the rest of the chairs in the group. Nicole's body language tells the who story, her shoulders drop and she looks at the ground, she takes a deep breath and then submits to the inevitable, taking her seat with the rest of the group. DR. BRADSHAW Okay, were going to pick up where we left off (MORE) ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 13. Copyright © 2002 DR. BRADSHAW (CONT'D) (beat) Who would like to begin the second half of our session by sharing why they are here? An awkward silence hangs, until MARK (raising hand) I guess I will DR. BRADSHAW Go ahead Mark. Mark Gathers his thoughts Marks dialog here is very important, His emotions are strong, but he also must keep his composure at all times. Never go overboard here. MARK My wife has been nagging me for months to come and talk with Dr. Bradshaw, she thinks it will help me sleep better, I know it sure couldn't hurt (beat) I don't know how many of your remember the old warehouse down on 2nd and Jefferson (beat) It went up on August 11? Most everyone acknowledges Mark with a nod in the affirmative, while Nicole, looking around, seems to be a little confused as to what he is referring to. MARK (CONT'D) Well it was a three alarm fire, and normally 13 wouldn't have gone that far north, but 9 & 11 were already battling a blaze on Monroe (beat) Anyway, my battalion was the first on scene, Mark can't even talk about the accident without become overly emotional, he fights the tears back. MARK (CONT'D) Upon arrival we were informed that there were upwards of 20 people still inside Nicole begins to get drawn into the account ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 14. Copyright © 2002 MARK (CONT'D) (angrily) There wasn't even suppose to be anyone in the building, (beat) It had been condemned for over a year. But a lot of homeless people had been living inside. (beat) I sent 7 men in, while the rest pulled hoses, we hadn't even turned the first hose on when the entire building gave way. (beat, fighting back tears) I lost six of my best friends and my brother. (beat) We worked in 24 hour shifts, it took us three days to recover all seven. (beat) Now I don't sleep much, and when I do, I have nightmares about my son being in that building, (beat) And I am the one who sends him in. Mark wipes the tears from his eyes and hides his face in his hand MARK (CONT'D) I'm sorry, I'm done Dr. Bradshaw looks at her watch and contemplates for a moment. DR. BRADSHAW (to Nicole) We haven't heard from Nicole yet Nicole shakes her head, it is obvious she is not interested in participating DR. BRADSHAW (CONT'D) Nicole would you tell the rest of us a little about yourself and why you are here today? NICOLE (unpleasantly) I didn't really come here to share my problems with a group of people, I just came to get a letter from the Doctor. Everyone looks at her with some hostility. While Dr. Bradshaw thinks. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 15. Copyright © 2002 DR. BRADSHAW Mrs. Warner, if you participate here today, you'll get your letter. Nicole roles her eyes. NICOLE (Under her breath) Fine! (beat, stands up) My name is Nicole Warner, I am an only child, both of my parents died when I was very young (beat, searching for facts) Um, I was raised by my grandmother, she was allergic to pets, So I never had any pets, (beat) Um, I am the top executive at a fortune 500 advertising agency, I don't have any hobbies, or play any sports, that's about it. Nicole sits back down and folds her arms Everyone stares at her until DR. BRADSHAW (nurturing) Why are you here Nicole? NICOLE (angry pause, cold) Well let's see, my boss gave me the ultimatum, either come here or take a month off of work, (beat) I don't have time to take a vacation, so here I am. MARK So your a workaholic? NICOLE (offended) I'm not a workaholic, I enjoy my work, like most people enjoy there vacations (beat) It's not a bad thing ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 16. Copyright © 2002 DR. BRADSHAW (to everyone) That's a common misconception most of us have, to much of anything can be a bad thing, we all need balance. (beat) Virtually every vitamin and mineral our body needs to stay healthy, will also poison us, if in too large of quantity over a prolonged period of time. (beat, to Nicole) When's the last time you took a vacation? NICOLE I go to New York once a year for a week. DR. BRADSHAW Oh, do you have family there? NICOLE No I don't. DR. BRADSHAW Friends? NICOLE Yeah, DR. BRADSHAW Anyone not at the World Advertising Convention? Nicole glares at Dr. Bradshaw NICOLE Look what does it matter if I submerge myself into my work, or I choose not to take vacations, (beat) Maybe it's just what works for me! DR. BRADSHAW Fare enough, (beat) But would you also be open to the possibility that your way isn't the best way? Dr. Bradshaw just stares at Nicole, waiting for a response. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 17. Copyright © 2002 NICOLE Only if you would be open to the possibility that your way isn't the best way. With that Nicole gives Dr. Bradshaw a smirk. DR. BRADSHAW It's not about doing things my way, It's about trying something new and looking at the results, then maybe, just maybe you will find something that makes you a little happier, a little more satisfied at the end of the day. (beat) Then maybe you'll have the desire to try something else, and then something else, until before you know it, you look back and wonder why you didn't see it before. (beat) Or possibly you look back and say "What was I thinking, what a waste of time that was" (beat) But you'll never know until you try, nothing will every change, unless you change it. (beat) Are you open to that possibility Nicole? Nicole has heard it all before, she doesn't need a cheerleader. NICOLE (belittling laugh) I didn't make it to where I am in my life because my daddy owned the corporation, or paid my way through an Ivy League School. (beat) I've busted my butt every single day of my entire life to get where I am, how dare you talk to me like I'm some Nicole's anger is steadily building NICOLE (CONT'D) (towards Devin) Fuzzy faced little boy who spends all weekend plastered or ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 18. Copyright © 2002 Devin is clearly unsure of the direction of Nicole's remark, as the puzzled look plainly shows. NICOLE (CONT'D) (towards Jenny) Some pig-tailed little girl who decided to start my life out under oppression. Jenny is shocked by the remark, so much so that she is speechless. NICOLE (CONT'D) I've made my own destiny and no one, not you or some slime ball on the street is going to take that away from me. MARK (raising his voice) Now wait a minute! What has anyone of us here done to you? Especially these two kids, (beat, disbelief) Why are you even here? What is it that your boss thinks so important to give you an ultimatum? Dr. Bradshaw quickly jumps in DR. BRADSHAW Okay, that's enough, no one should feel like they have to talk, (beat) This is a place where each of you can come and feel safe. Not a place to (to Nicole) Make judgments about what others have said or (to Mark and the others) Pry when someone doesn't feel like sharing. This is an active participation session, you'll only get out of it what you put into it. (to Nicole) It's your choice (looking at her watch) Now we have a few minutes left, would anyone else like to share why they are here? Dr. Bradshaw focuses on the only other two people who we have yet to hear from. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 19. Copyright © 2002 GEORGE, a middle aged, balding, nerdy looking fellow and MARTHA, an overweight frumpy looking 30 something. However, both don't look they are going to share anything soon. NICOLE It's really not a big deal Everyone looks a little surprised. NICOLE (CONT'D) It's nothing like the things you guys have been talking about. (beat) I work on the 47 floor of the Tri Towers, and most nights I am the last one to leave. (beat) But it's never been a problem, our building is completely secure, you can't even get in, in the middle of the day without a pass, let alone at night. (beat, deep breath) I didn't know it, but a janitor from the cleaning crew had been watching me for a while. (beat) That night he waited for me inside the parking garage, (beat) I didn't realize what was happening at first, (beat, no emotion, just tears) He laid me face down on the hood of my car. (places hand on throat) All I could think about was the knife, it hurt so bad. (beat) Then he was just gone. Nicole wipes the tears from here eyes and looks at the Doctor. NICOLE (CONT'D) (coldly) That's why I'm here. DR. BRADSHAW Is this the first time you have talked about it? Nicole is obviously not interested in dragging this out ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 20. Copyright © 2002 NICOLE Look, it's not that big of a deal. I'm not the first person this has happened to, this is just one of those things that happens in life, (beat) You forget about, and move on. With a crash, Marks chair slams against the wall behind him. ANGLE ON Mark who stood up with such force that his chair lays limply against the wall. MARK How dare you, (Tear to Anger & Anger to Tears) This isn't something that you can just forget about, it doesn't just go away (beat) No matter how deep into your work you get, it will always be there, it will undermine every relationship you ever have, it will steal the intimacy away like a thief (beat) Mark had began to calm down, everyone is dumbfounded by the revelation. ANGLE ON Nicole who begins to break emotionally, tears well up, and her posture becomes very open. MARK (CONT'D) You can't just push it away, because it will wait until your guard is down and like a wrecking ball it will blind side you without notice. Mark looks at everyone, and realizes the scene he has just made. He grabs his chair and sits back down MARK (CONT'D) (sincerely to Nicole) I have never talked about this to anyone before (beat) I've never even told my wife. Mark explodes with deep remorse and sorrow. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Written By: J. Daniel Nell 21. Copyright © 2002 MARK (CONT'D) (wallowing) Dr. Bradshaw moves over to comfort him ANGLE ON Nicole who's face shows the shift, then the release of emotion. ANGLE ON Mark who is being consoled by Dr. Bradshaw ANGLE ON Jenny & Devin who now console Nicole SOUND FADES as Camera pulls back into the darkness DISSOLVE TO: EXT. FRONT OF SMALL DOWNTOWN OFFICE -- CONTINUOUS The street is as it much was only an hour before. Our Transient is back, with new sign in hand "Stranded need $30 GOD BLESS". Nicole walks out of the office and sees the Transient back at it. As their eyes meet, the Transient looks a little embarrassed, but Nicole just smiles. (For the first time) Turning away, Nicole begins to walk down the street and towards the park. Picking up her cell phone, Nicole dials: NICOLE Hi it's me (beat) Clear my schedule for the rest of the day, push everything to tomorrow, (beat, hesitation) And clear the Noon hour for Monday, Wednesday, and Fridays for the next month. (beat, smile) I've got an appointment. Hanging up the phone, Nicole rounds the corner and enters the park. MUSIC QUE CREDITS ROLL As Nicole walks through the park.