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"The Road Providence" |
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"The Road Providence" |
FADE IN: INT. ER TRAUMA ROOM -- DAY ANGLE ON A standard issue Hospital Cardiac Machine, Flat Lining, and
the high pitch tone that the machine makes. A Hand reaches
in front of machine fumbling to turn it off without success.
ANGLE PULLS OUT to show four people in the TRAUMA room. MATHEW, about the
age of 10, sits on the hospital bed. His MOTHER stands by
his side holding a bloody rag on his head. Sitting on a
small swivel chair at the foot of the bed is Mathews' FATHER,
who is still trying to turn off the machine. Next to the
father stands ELIZABETH, a young girl about 7, holding her
ears as to block out the loud annoying noise.
INT. OUTSIDE ER TRAUMA ROOM #4 -- CONTINUOUS Long Cluttered hall just outside ER Trauma Room #4, the faint
sound of a hospital cardiac machine can be heard. Gurneys
and medical equipment line the brightly lit hallways. A
young mexican man mops the floor at the end of the hall,
while NURSE #1 walks briskly towards DR. JAMES DANIELS
Dr. Daniels stands near the door to #4 flipping through a
medical chart.
NURSE #1
(worried)
Is everything okay Doctor?
DR. DANIELS
(Smiling)
Yeah, looks like a cardiac monitor
was left in the room.
NURSE #1
(sarcastically)
Oh... and someone has been playing?
DR. DANIELS
Looks like it.....
(closing chart)
Well, I better go break up the party.
NURSE #1
(walking away)
Be gentle Doctor.
INT. TRAUMA ROOM #4 -- CONTINUOUS Mathew's father is still trying to shut off the machine.
The frustration is building
FATHER
(Upset)
Elizabeth, this is why I told you
NOT to play with things.
MOTHER
ALLEN, just take her outside
(beat)
go and get Elizabeth a soda, we'll
be fine.
ANGLE ON Trauma room door opens, Dr. Daniels enters DR. DANIELS
(worried)
Am I too late?
BACK TO SCENE James looks at the little girl and then flips the machine
easily off. Elizabeth laughs
FATHER
C'mon Elizabeth, lets go.
Father and Daughter leave room MOTHER
Sorry, she just started playing and
it went off....
DR. DANIELS
Don't worry about it, I've done the
same thing. Except the first time I
set one off... A patient was hooked
up to it and well, he was convinced
he was a goner.
Dr. Daniels smiles at the boy, then looks at the chart DR. DANIELS
Hey kiddo, what's up?
Mathew sits quietly on gerney shyly looking up at Dr. Daniels MOTHER
Mathew?
directing her attention to Dr. Daniels MOTHER
He's really scared
Dr. Daniels smiles at the Mother then looks to Mathew DR. DANIELS
Hi there Mathew
James Extends his hand to shake Mathew's hand DR. DANIELS
I'm Dr. James Daniels, but all my
friends call me Jimmy
Mathew comes right out of his shell MATHEW
Can I call you Jimmy?
DR. DANIELS
Of course...
(Putting on latex
gloves)
Now Mathew...
being immediately interrupted MATHEW
(Very Fast/Excited)
Actually, you can call me Matt, only
my Mom and Dad and my aunt that always
pinches my cheeks call me Mathew,
(thinking momentarily)
well, and sometimes my little sister.
But she just do's it to bug me.
A little stunned by the boys response. DR. DANIELS
Okay Matt, lets take a look at this.
Dr. Daniels pulls the bloody rag slowly off of Matt's head.
Mathew looking contently without fear.
DR. DANIELS
Wow, so where did you get this little
scrape from?
MATHEW
Well, it was an accident, my mom hit
me with a baseball bat, pretty hard
too.
Mathew turns his head and winks and smiles at Dr. Daniels MOTHER
(Dumbfounded)
I.... Uh.... Mathew!
DR. DANIELS
(Looking at Mother)
Oh, I see....
(to Mathew)
Well lets get this taken care of
first.
(Wink)
We'll deal with mom later.
Mathew returns the wink with a giggle. ANGLE ON Mathew's brightly colored shirt, the laughter continues into
next scene.
DISSOLVE TO: INT. CLASSROOM -- CONTINUOUS Sound of Mathew's laugh also dissolves to the class where
the other children laughs take over
ANGLE PULLS OUT to show a group of school children between eight and nine
years old, sitting on the floor. The sound of laughter fills
the room, as the children react to a story being read by
REBECCA the teacher
REBECCA
As the cowardly beast brushed the
snow from his snout, THWAP, Another
cloud of snow covers his head
Rebecca then glances at her watch and closes the book REBECCA
So, what do ya think. Should we
finish the book tomorrow?
CHILDREN
Aw.....
A boy throws his hands in the air ADAM
(interrupting)
I think we should pro-crust-and-ape
pausing for a moment ADAM
I think we should finish it now!
SARA
YEAH! Me too
CHILDREN
Yeah....
Sara, the little girl in agreement looks kinda pensive SARA
(Confused)
Miss Becky? what does pro-custer-
pate mean?
REBECCA
(Smiling)
Well Sara, to Procrastinate means,
to put off till later.
Raising her hand high, and most of her body. SARA
Miss Becky?
REBECCA
Yes Sara?
SARA
I don't think we should procrutinase
then
Rebecca gets out of her chair REBECCA
(Standing)
This looks like a good place to stop.
So lets all get cleaned up. Put
your tote-trays away, and make sure
your desks are straight
All of the children chaotically jump up and start putting
things away, grabbing green bins from under there desks and
putting them in numbered slots in the wall.
REBECCA
(Yelling over children)
Okay, now don't forget Parent-Teachers
conference is Thursday evening.
Rebecca shows a stack of pink papers to the children REBECCA
(Taking one off the
top)
I need you all to take one of these
home to your parents..
Rebecca puts the papers on one of the front row desks. REBECCA
I expect to see everyone's parents
here. Remember this counts as part
of your grade
MELLISSA is a cute but obviously spoiled child. Her parents
shop at the GAP no doubt. And I don't mean the clearance
rack.
MELLISSA
Okay Miss Becky, Both my parents
will be coming
DERRICK is a short blond boy, not very out spoken, but he's
proud and wants to share.
DERRICK
My Mom can't come Miss Becky, But my
Dad will be here
REBECCA
That's great, how about everyone
else?
ADAM
Miss Becky, what if my parents can't
come?
REBECCA
Well Adam, that's what this letter
is for.
Gesturing to all the children REBECCA
That is what this paper is for. If
any of your parents can not make it
Thursday, there are instructions
here for them to call me, that way
we can have your conference over the
phone or arrange it for another time.
Adam makes a real funny face, kinda odd, frustrated. Rebecca
sees Adams frustrations.
REBECCA
(to Adam)
Come here Adam
In a sweat nurturing voice REBECCA
I'm sure your parents will be proud
of you,
(smile)
when we talk
With a big a smile and vibrant energy ADAM
Really?
REBECCA
Really!
ADAM
Okay Miss Becky, My mom will
definitely be here then
Adam turns and runs back to finish picking up Rebecca stands there, with a very satisfied look. She smiles
a quiet little smile. These are the days that she lives
for.
CUT TO: INT. TRAUMA ROOM 4 -- -- DAY Dr. Daniels is pulling off his surgical gloves, obviously
done with what he was doing.
DR. DANIELS
Okay Matt, that will do it, and only
seven stitches.
MATHEW
(Angry)
SEVEN!!! You told me I wouldn't
need stitches, you told me you were
just going to clean it out.
Dr. Daniels obviously sees the humor in the situation. (While
talking) Dr. Daniels lifts Mathew off the Gerney and walks
over to the door of the room.
DR. DANIELS
(Justifying)
Well...
(beat)
That's what I was doing, just cleaning
it out. But then you started telling
me about your little league game,
(beat)
Well, I just got so involved with
it... And before I knew it, you had
seven stitches.
MATHEW
(puzzled)
Oh.
INT. HALLWAY JUST OUTSIDE TRAUMA ROOM 4 -- CONTINUOUS Mathew and his Mother walk out of trauma room #4 and into
the hallway. Dr. Daniels follows.
DR. DANIELS
And besides, I believe your now the
toughest kid to walk through this
the Emergency Room.
Dr. Daniels, Mathew and his Mother all stand in the hall. MATHEW
Really?
DR. DANIELS
Really!
Excitedly Mathew turns to his mother. MATHEW
Did you hear that mom?
MOTHER
I sure did.
Turning to Dr. Daniels MOTHER
Thank you Doctor, you really are a
wonderful pediatrician.
Modestly Dr. Daniels replies DR. DANIELS
Well thank you, but it was only a
few stitches
Dr. Daniels puts his hand on Mathew's shoulder. DR. DANIELS
(to Mother)
And besides, you've got a great kid
here.
Mathew's mom is very grateful. She obviously has a great
deal of respect for Dr. Daniels.
MOTHER
Good Looking and Humble, where were
you 13 years ago?
From around a far corner of the hall Elizabeth, Mathew's
sister, comes running towards them. Mathew's father follows
in close pursuit.
Dr. Daniels sees Elizabeth then looks down at Mathew DR. DANIELS
Okay Sport, you watch that head of
yours.
Dr. Daniels looks and Mathew's mother with a serious face DR. DANIELS
Be careful where your swinging that
bat.
Dr. Daniels looks down at Mathew and Winks. Mathew's mother
grabs his hand and turn to leave. Mathew and his family are
walking back down the hall, away from Dr. Daniels. Mathew
turns his head and smiles at James.
James finishes filling out the paperwork. MATHEW
Thanks Dr. Jimmy.
James looks up at Mat and smiles DR. DANIELS
Take care Matt.
James turns around and walks the opposite direction, placing
Mathew's chart in a receptacle as he walks by it. James
passes Room #5,6,7 before he stops at room #8. James takes
the chart and flips through the pages.
As James is looking at the chart, a NURSE come running down
the hall from admitting, yelling.
NURSE #1
Doctor, we just got call from mobile,
two majors coming in.
James puts the chart back and hurriedly follows the nurse. INT. OPEN ER ADMITTING AREA -- MOMENTS LATER James and a Nurse #1 enter a very large admitting area.
Most of the walls are lined with waiting room chairs. Except
for where a large counter along the far wall. Directly across
from the counter are automatic double doors. Above the doors
in large red letters - EMERGENCY ROOM ENTRANCE - AMBULANCE
ONLY -
James and the Nurse entered from a hall that joins the room
kitty corner from both the counter and the ER Doors.
Just after James enters the Admitting area, two POLICE
OFFICERS briskly enter through the electric doors.
DR. DANIELS
(to Officer #1)
What's coming in?
OFFICER #1
We just came from a gang war up on
27th.
DR. DANIELS
27th is 20 min from here
OFFICER #1
I know, they took 10 or so to
Northridge.
OFFICER #2
And twice that many to St. Marks
DR. DANIELS
So what are they bringing here?
Officers looking dumbfounded and unresponsive. James turns
to the nurses sitting behind the counter.
DR. DANIELS
(Nurses behind counter)
What's coming in?
NURSE #2
(hand over phone)
I'm one the line now.
The Nurse focuses her attention back to the phone NURSE #2
(Into phone)
Okay, what are there conditions?
(to Dr. Daniels)
Looks like only two.
pausing to listen to the phone NURSE #1
(to Dr. Daniels)
One has a neck injury and...
pausing again to listen NURSE #1
and the second has a gunshot wound
in the epigastric area.
DR. DANIELS
(To Nurse #2, speaking
very fast)
Get two trauma rooms ready, notify
Dr. Fredrickson of the situation and
call surgical, let them know we need
someone down here...STAT
NURSE #1
There here!
An ambulance can be seen pulling up through the doors. Dr.
Daniels and Nurse #1 run through the E.R. doors
EXT. OUTSIDE EMERGENCY ROOM ENTRANCE -- CONTINUOUS Ambulance has pulled up to ER doors. The Passenger EMT jumps
out of the ambulance and runs to the rear door and opens it.
Dr. Daniels and the Nurse assist in pulling the Gang member
out.
EMT #1
(to Dr. Daniels)
This guy is wacko. he's got what
looks like a gun shot wound to the
epigastric area. but were not sure,
he's been fighting us the entire
time.
The 1st Gang member is a 17 year old caucasian male. He is
strapped down to the gurney, which is in a semi-upright
position. Both of his wrists are hand-cuffed to the railings.
He's screaming and yelling at the EMT and the POLICE OFFICER
#3 in the back of the Ambulance.
EMT #1
We gave him --500cc's of some med to
knock him out--, But as you can see
it's not working to well
1ST GANG MEMBER
(to the police officer)
I'll Fucken kill you. You better
Fucking let me go, you can't keep
me.
(Pause, struggling)
You better keep me tied up or I'll
Kill you... and your Fucking Families!
Dr. Daniels tries to calm the kid down by asking him
questions. Dr. Daniels pulls some gloves out of his med
coat pocket and puts them on.
DR. DANIELS
Hey settle down, What's your name.
1ST GANG MEMBER
(Yelling at Dr. daniels)
Fuck You Asshole. Don't touch me...
I don't need your help!
DR. DANIELS
(SERIOUS STARE)
I'll make a deal with ya.
1ST GANG MEMBER
(Yelling)
Fuck You!
DR. DANIELS
(Calming voice)
I know, you already made that clear.
Here's the deal. You settle down,
let us see if we can't save your
life here. Because if you don't get
medical attention you WILL die.
The 1st gang member listens, strangely he seems to admire or
possibly even respect Dr. Daniels. Although we are not clear
why
DR. DANIELS
Or.. we can let this fine gentleman
(referring to EMT)
put you back in and take you for a
joyride for an hour or so, until you
settle down or passout from the
pain...Or possibly DIE!
(beat)
Your choice.
A moment goes by, staring into each others eyes.. Who will
give?
DR. DANIELS
(turning away)
Fine your choice.
1ST GANG MEMBER
(pants down)
Oh-Okay!
The strange connection is made between the two, the kind of
connection that alters people lives, turns sinners into
saints. Or maybe its just the medication taking effect
DR. DANIELS
(Smiling)
Good. So what is your name?
1ST GANG MEMBER
Richy.. my name is Richy Davis
DR. DANIELS
(examining)
Okay Richy Davis..
As Dr. Daniels is examining the Richy a second ambulance can
be seen pulling in behind the first. James turns to look at
the ambulance.
DR. DANIELS
The Nurse is going to take you inside.
I'll be right behind her. Remember
our deal?
DR. DANIELS
(Serious to nurse)
Get this guy to trauma room #1
NURSE #1
The room isn't ready yet
DR. DANIELS
(frustrated)
Then just get him inside then....
And call up to surgery and see if we
got a surgeon available yet
Running to the next ambulance, James rips off the bloody
gloves and reaches into his pocket and grabs another pair.
The EMT team has already got 2nd Gang Member out of the
ambulance.
EMT #2
(to Dr. daniels)
This guys in bad shape, It looks
like someone used him for target
practice. He's Wasted and incoherent.
Putting on the gloves DR. DANIELS
What are we looking at?
This Gang Member is of Mexican decent. He got himself loaded
up on crank just before the fight. He's totally incoherent.
He has an I.V. running into his right arm, his chest and
left arm are totally covered in blood. We can't even tell
what color his close were. The EMTs' have bandaged his neck
wound and several other small places on this body. This
gurney is also in a semi-upright position.
EMT #2
Well for starters, I think the largest
wound is in the neck area, it's
amazing they didn't hit the charaded
artery. He's been stable for about
5 minutes. We started an I.V. and
gave him 200 cc's of --DRUG--. His
B.P. is --95/120-- and his pulse is
72.
Looking around for a nurse and not seeing one. DR. DANIELS
(to EMT #2)
Help me get this guy inside.
INT. OPEN ER ADMITTING AREA -- CONTINUOUS ANGLE ON Nurse #1, NURSE #4, a FEMALE DOCTOR and POLICE OFFICER #3
all stand around Richy's gurney. The gurney is at the end
of the Admitting area near the hall which leads to the trauma
rooms. Police Officers #1 and #2 are standing at the
admitting counter just watching the events that follow.
MASTER ANGLE Dr. Daniel and the Emt's enter from outside, through the
double doors.
DR. DANIELS
(To nurse at desk)
Where are my Trauma rooms?
Nurse #1 leaves Richy's side and joins Dr. Daniels. NURSE AT DESK
(Panic)
There not ready yet Doctor
DR. DANIELS
How bout my surgeons
NURSE ON PHONE
I've got one coming down now
DR. DANIELS
It better be a vascular
NURSE ON PHONE
(Sarcastically agreeing)
Any other miracles I can get you
Doctor?
DR. DANIELS
Just get me those rooms.
ANGLE ON Richy and the team working on him. Richy is just lying there.
He has and oxygen mask over his face and he is casually
looking around spotting the rival gang member. The drugs
have obviously kicked in, because he glares but does little
else.
The Female Doctor is standing on his left side, while a MALE
NURSE and Police Officer #3 are to his right. The Male Nurse
is trying to replace an I.V. line that has pulled out. The
Doctor is examining the wound in his stomach. Police Officer
#3 just watches.
FEMALE DOCTOR
(To Nurse)
Hurry up with that line
MALE NURSE
I can't find a decent vane Doctor,
there ALL blown. They seemed to
have found the only one left on this
kid
FEMALE DOCTOR
(Holding her hand out)
Give it to me!
The Doctor turns Richy's handcuffed arm over finding multiple
track lines in the arm.
ANGLE ON .45 holstered on Police Officer #3 side. PULL BACK to show Richy Eyeing the .45, which could be just within
reach, if not for the Hand-cuffs around his wrists.
FEMALE DOCTOR
(in reference to
Miguel's arm)
God...
(beat)
No wonder. Looks like he's had some
practice.
(to police officer)
Take this off please
(talking about
handcuffs)
I need this off now!
The officer disagrees with her plan OFFICER #2
(Shaking head)
I can't do that, he's too dangerous
FEMALE DOCTOR
(Barking orders)
You can and you will, I need to get
this I.V. in
Reluctantly the officer reacts, reaching for his keys and
taking the Cuff off his left arm.
FEMALE DOCTOR
(to officer)
Thank You.
CUT TO: INT. OPEN ER ADMITTING AREA -- -- CONTINUOUS Dr. Daniels and Nurse #1 are working on 2nd Gang Member who
is still totally incoherent. Dr. Daniels is trying to clean
up the gash on the Gang members neck. Gang Member opens his
eyes and looks at Dr. Daniels.
NURSE #1
Doctor
DR. DANIELS
(looking at nurse)
hmm?
The nurse looks down at the gang member then back at the
doctor
DR. DANIELS
(to gang member)
Hey there, I'm Dr. Daniels, your at
County General Hospital. Were trying
to close some of these holes you've
got.
The gang member stares blankly at Dr. Daniels then turns his
head and looks at the Nurse.
CUT TO: P.O.V. 2ND GANG MEMBER -- CONTINUOUS Looking at Nurse #1, Everything is blurry, sounds are slow
and distorted. Nurse #1 is saying something? But it is
unclear.
He turns and looks back at Dr. Daniels MASTER ANGLE: INT. OPEN ER ADMITTING AREA -- CONTINUOUS Dr. Daniels is still trying to get any response from 2nd
Gang Member.
DR. DANIELS
Can you tell me your name?
NURSE AT DESK (O.S.)
Doctors, the rooms are ready. Your
vascular surgeon is in room #1.
DR. DANIELS
(looking back at desk)
Its about time
ANGLE ON 2nd Gang Members bloody hand, he holds a knife that has gone
unnoticed by everyone to this point. It is being gripped
tightly, and tucked with the blade back under his arm.
Master Angle: The gang member doesn't realize what is happening. He has
no idea that he is being helped. He looks around fearfully.
Then out of self defense or complete disregard for life, he
raises the knife into the air and strikes the nurse in the
throat, only scratching her. Then turns the knife on Dr.
Daniels stabbing him in the upper left chest.
Dr. Daniels stumbles back falling against a wall, still
standing though. The Two officers dumbfounded, look at the
Doctor, realizing what has just happened remove there 9mm
from there holsters and cover the now unarmed gang member
who just sits there.
Dr. daniels looks down at the very bloody knife which
protrudes from his left shoulder area and then notices the
Officers.
DR. DANIELS
(Moving forward, hand
out)
Don't!!
NURSE AT DESK
(Screams)
Oh My God!
BAM! A shot flies past the Gang member and embeds itself in
the wall just behind. Both Officers turn to see Richy holding
a smoking .45, pointed at the rival gang member.
The Female Doctor and Male Nurse can be seen diving for cover
on the ground behind. While the Office #3 is leaning down
grabbing an ankle holstered .22 from under his pant leg.
Dr. daniels looking very flush, jumps forward with both hands
out.
DR. DANIELS
(to Richy)
It's not worth it!!
Bam!! The second bullet hits its mark. lodging itself in
the chest of the rival gang member.
BAM! BAM! BAM! BAM! BAM! BAM! BAM! BAM! BAM! Both
Officers empty there clips into the now very dead Miguel.
The single officer now sits on his ass holding his ankle
with both hands. He just couldn't get that damn gun out!
CUT TO: P.O.V. DR. DANIELS -- CONTINUOUS He looks at the rival gang member, then up at the two
officers. EVERYTHING is getting blurry, He looks over to
Miguel. The Female Nurse rushes towards him.
ALL GOES UNCLEAR, LOUD RINGING: INT. CLASSROOM -- DAY The sound of a school bell RINGS LOUDLY. Kids shuffle out
of the classroom. Becky is cleaning off the chalk board
that is on the front wall of the room. Class is empty now
except one tiny little girl named KATHY, who stands in front
of the teachers desk that is just behind Becky.
KATHY
Ms. Becky?
MS. BECKY
(Turning around)
Kathy! What are you still doing
here?
KATHY
(Upset,timid)
He can't make it on parent teacher
night,
(looking at her feet)
He works at night
(beat)
And he never goes any where before
work.
MS. BECKY
(consoling)
Hmm
(beat)
Can he call me?
KATHY
(tearfully)
We don't have a phone, he doesn't
like people calling us.
MS. BECKY
Wonder if I dropped by your house,
Thursday after Parent Teacher
Conferences?
(Beat)
I should be done by 7:30
KATHY
(Big Smile)
Yeah?
(Sigh)
But he goes to work at eight O'Clock
MS. BECKY
(Trying very hard)
Well, I'm sure I can get there in
time.
KATHY
(Ecstatic)
That would be great! I'll tell him
your coming.
MS. BECKY
Okay,
(beat)
Make sure you let him know it will
take about 15 minutes.
KATHY
(Running out of
classroom)
Oh Thank You Ms. Becky,
(Beat)
Thank You!
Rebecca Stands there with a very gratified look. ANGLE Follows Kathy running out of the room. As she reaches the
door we see MR. WILCOX leaning up against the door frame.
KATHY
(To Mr. Wilcox)
Excuse me Mr. Wilcox.
MR. WILCOX
(To Becky)
Bye Becky.
KATHY
See ya later Mr. Wilcox!
MS. BECKY (O.S.)
(very friendly)
Well hello, Mr. Wilcox.
MASTER ANGLE MR. WILCOX
(Walking towards)
Hi Miss Becky.
MS. BECKY
(Jokingly)
That's Ms. to you
(Beat)
I don't see a ring on this finger!
MR. WILCOX
Really?
(Beat)
I thought for sure a woman like you
would be married by now.
MS. BECKY
(Sarcastically)
Ya Ya Ya Ya,
(Beat)
Tell my boyfriend!
MR. WILCOX
(Moving in)
You know? I though we had a date
Thursday night?
Mr. Wilcox embraces Ms. Becky. They now stand loosely holding
each other
MS. BECKY
(Realization)
Oh Man!
(Beat)
Why didn't you say something?
MR. WILCOX
(Chuckling)
You saw the look on her face.
MS. BECKY
(Torn between thoughts)
I know
(Beat)
But I can't not show up either
(beat)
I'll just have to be late for dinner!
MR. WILCOX
(Sarcastically, serious)
Sure, That's no problem.... 250 people
waiting on the guest of honor, No
Biggi.
MS. BECKY
(Kinda Frazzled)
MARK! I can make it by 9:15 or so,
You'll just have to stall
(beat)
besides, the award is for teacher of
the year, and that's what I'm trying
to be for my students
(jokingly)
besides, It'll make a good opening
remark.
MARK
So I guess this means we won't be
going together?
MS. BECKY
(Sincere)
I'm sorry baby, I'll have to get
dressed before I leave the school.
MARK
(Upset, but
understanding)
Okay, but were going home together,
and you better call me if your gonna
be any later.
MS. BECKY
Of course....
They gently kiss MS. BECKY
C'mon, lets go, I've got a lot of
papers to grade tonight
Holding hands, Mark and Rebecca walk out of the room. Rebecca
grabs her black leather briefcase bag off the desk.
MARK
Your not gonna fall asleep on the
couch again are ya?
Exiting the room REBECCA (O.S.)
Actually, I think I'll bring the
papers to bed tonight
CUT TO: INT. REBECCAS' BEDROOM -- NIGHT It is very important that this scene not be about control or
jealousy on Marks part. This scene is to give some
understanding and importance to Rebecca teaching career.
Remember she believes she makes a difference. But also this
scene must show that Rebecca has the need to not need anyone
else. She has had to work her entire adult life to get to
this point, she's never had help, she's only had hurt.
Rebecca sits in bed grading school papers. While Mark has
just gotten out of the shower.
REBECCA
(to herself)
Billy, Billy, Billy,
(beat)
c'mon you know this stuff
MARK (O.S.)
So why is it after four years you
finally ask me to move in?
REBECCA
(sarcastically)
Because you agreed to do the dishes
Mark enters the room. In a bath robe and a towel over his
shoulder. His hair is still wet
MARK
You're a regular Robin Williams
(beat)
Was it because I proposed?
REBECCA
Honey, what are you talking about?
You've lived here for over two months.
MARK
I know, but we've known each other
since college, and we have been
sleeping together for two years now
REBECCA
(interrupting)
We have not been sleeping together
two years
MARK
two years on my birthday.
(Smiling)
I'll never forget that birthday.
REBECCA
Still your birthday is over two weeks
away.
MARK
My point being, all this time I've
had to drive from my house to here.
Why did you finally ask me to move
in?
Mark stares at her, but she is not totally focused on Mark.
As her body language shows.
MARK
Rebecca?
REBECCA
What?
MARK
Why is that? Why have we only lived
together for two months?
Rebecca focuses her attention on Mark. She doesn't want to
talk about something so trivial. She just wants to get all
the papers graded.
REBECCA
I've always known that I was going
to be a teacher. Ever since I had
Elizabeths fourth grade class.
(beat)
I think it was because I knew that I
could impact others, make a difference
in the world. Even if it was just
one person at a time.
(beat)
Teaching has always been a dream for
me. My mom told me to follow my
dreams with all my heart, never let
another stand in the way.
(beat)
So that's the reason, I know it sounds
trivial but that's it
Rebecca goes back to grading papers. Mark has always know
teaching was the most important thing to her, but he was
totally lost on that one.
MARK
So you were afraid that I would come
between you and teaching?
REBECCA
Honey, you don't understand, I needed
to reach this point in my life.
Where everything is secure. I've
got my own class with 32 beautiful
children. I live in a wonderful
place.
MARK
So you wanted to feel comfortable?
REBECCA
No, I needed to be comfortable,not
just with my teaching career, but
with myself. I needed this before I
could commit to anything else,
including you. I'm just glad you
stuck around.
Rebecca pushes the papers off the bed and moves towards Mark MARK
You can't get rid of me that easily
As they embrace in a kiss we CUT TO: INT. E.R. ADMITTING DESK -- AFTERNOON Where two nurses sit behind the desk talking, while a DR.
WILLIAM MANCHESTER stands in front filling out what looks
like a mountain of paperwork. Dr. Manchester is a large
black man, everything about him screams James Earl Jones.
The hustle and bustle of the last time we saw the E.R. is
gone. Everything has returned back to normal. Well, as
normal as an E.R.gets.
NANCY
(to Maria)
And this is my last week of night
school.
(Stamping papers)
I don't know what I'll do with all
my free time
Just as the telephone at the counter rings MARIA
(to Nancy)
Oh, Dear, I'm sure you will find
things to do
(Into phone)
University Emergency Admitting, this
is Maria, how can I help you?
Maria fades out of the scene, focus is now on Nancy and Dr.
Manchester.
NANCY
Dr. Manchester?
(beat)
How is Doctor Daniels doing?
DR. MANCHESTER
(pre-occupied)
He's doing really well...
(beat)
He's taking a couple weeks off and
getting some rest...
NANCY
(smiling)
I'm glad, he's needed it for awhile
DR. DANIELS
(still elsewhere)
Ya, well...Try telling him that.
NANCY
(uncomfortably)
So, how's JOHN DOE? Has he come to?
DR. MANCHESTER
Not yet
NANCY
How bout the blood tests? Any word
yet?
DR. MANCHESTER
(Now focused on
conversation)
Nancy!
(beat)
You know I can't discuss that.
NANCY
(Worried)
I know, but...
(sigh)
I'm just worried about...
(beat)
that could of been any of us.
DR. MANCHESTER
(Comforting)
I know, but its still James choice
who he shares that information with.
NANCY
Your right, maybe I'll give him a
call later
(beat)
Or speak of the devil...
Nancys' eyes widen as she looks over Dr. Manchester's
shoulder. James has just come through the automatic doors.
He is wearing a jack that covers the sling that holds his
left arm. Still James looks surprisingly well.
DR. MANCHESTER
(Upset)
James, what in the HELL are you doing
here?
(beat)
I told you to go home and stay there!
JAMES
I know, I know, but I go CRAZY just
moping around there.
(beat)
this is the first time in ten years
I haven't been focusing on my work.
DR. MANCHESTER
Then I guess this accident is a
blessing huh?
A cocky smile come to James face while he listens DR. MANCHESTER
Now get outta here, goto the park
(beat)
walk around Temple Square, take I
drive, I don't care just get outta
here.. NOW!!
James knew this was the reaction he was going to get... But
still he had to try. He's going crazy not having something
to do.
JAMES
(to his friend)
Okay William
(shaking his head)
Doctors Orders eh?
DR. MANCHESTER
(Yelling)
GET OUTTA HERE....
(Laughing)
I'll see you in two weeks!
With a grin to his friend, James walks away JAMES
(smiling)
Yeah, Yeah, Yeah
NANCY (O.S.)
Hi and bye Doctor
Hearing Nancy, james continues to walk, but turns around to
say
JAMES
Nancy... call me when your off, I'll
take you up on that rain check
NANCY
(taken back)
Oh..Okay Doctor
James EXITS. and the focus is now back on Nancy and Maria MARIA
Sooo? he decided to finally take
you up on the rain check huh?
NANCY
(Sigh,Smile)
Yeah...
MARIA
And how long has it been since you
gave him that rain check?
(beat)
six...nine months?
NANCY
(on cloud nine)
A year....
MARIA
(laughing)
Well better now than never
NANCY
(Sigh)
Yeah...
CUT TO: INT. LONG DARK SCHOOL HALLWAY -- EVENING Older sophisticated lady (MRS. ELIZABETH ANDERSON) in her
early 50's, walks down the hall. Her high heals tap against
the hard floor with every step. Mrs. Anderson enters a room
that is clearly marked Staff Only.
CUT TO: INT. STAFF ROOM -- CONTINUOUS Rebecca stands in front of a small wall mirror. She is
jumping up and down struggling to gain entry into a beautiful
black evening dress.
MRS. ANDERSON
That's a beautiful dress Rebecca
ANGLE SHOWS Rebecca looking at Mrs. Anderson through the mirror REBECCA
(Startled by Mrs.
Anderson)
Mrs. Anderson! I didn't think you
were still here.
MRS. ANDERSON
I usually lock up after the parents
leave
(reminiscing)
Sometimes I just hang around to talk
to some of my old students
REBECCA
(into mirror)
You know Mrs. Anderson, Your the
reason I became a teacher.
(beat)
You were always my favorite teacher.
And you always treated the kids like
adults
MRS. ANDERSON
(parenting)
I've always found that when I treat
a my students like adults, they act
like adults
Rebecca admires and respects Mrs. Anderson more than any
other person. She listens to her and takes it in.
MRS. ANDERSON
Do you know what the only complaint
I've had over the years is?
REBECCA
(Shaking head NO)
No.
Mrs. Anderson walks over to Rebecca and does up the back of
her dress.
MRS. ANDERSON
(Zipping up dress)
I can't get any of my prior student
to call me Elizabeth, even the ones
who's kids I see everyday.
REBECCA
(Laughing lovingly)
That's because we all hold you in
such high regards,
(turning around)
I've tried, You know I've tried, but
you will always be Mrs. Anderson to
me.
MRS. ANDERSON
(thinking)
You know, 18 years ago I received
the same award you'll be getting
tonight.
(smiling)
I didn't deserve it half as much as
you do.
REBECCA
(Embarrassed)
Thank You...
(beat)
Your going to be there aren't you?
MRS. ANDERSON
Of course my dear, I wouldn't miss
it.
Rebecca looks absolutely stunning. She starts shoving all
of her things into a shoulder bag.
REBECCA
(Looking at watch)
Well if I don't get outta here I'm
not going to make it either.
MRS. ANDERSON
You've got plenty of time, don't
rush yourself
REBECCA
I know, but I have to go see Kathy
Littles' Father first.
MRS. ANDERSON
(Truly proud)
My child, your one of a kind,
(beat)
HURRY UP! I'll see you there.
REBECCA
(Hurrying off)
Thank You Mrs. Anderson....a Elizabeth
Mrs. Anderson stands there alone with the look a parent has
when his or her child accomplishes greatness. Because Rebecca
will always be one of her children.
CUT TO: INT. LONG DARK SCHOOL HALLWAY -- CONTINUOUS Rebecca runs down the hall towards the doors at the end,
which lead outside. The camera stays in position as Rebecca
get farther away and finally exits to
EXT. OUTSIDE SCHOOL/PARKING LOT -- EVENING The rain is pouring down as Rebecca runs down the sidewalk
towards her vehicle, a '95 pearl white Honda Accord. Throws
her shoulder bag on top of the vehicle and fumbles for the
keys. She opens the vehicle, throwing her bag onto the
passengers seat.
Rebecca starts the car and speeds off down the road. CUT TO: INT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- EVENING Looking through a rain covered windshield we see a wet road
lit only by the headlights from this car. A soft classical
ensemble plays on the radio.
Windshield wipers quietly wipe away the rain. Almost dancing
to the rhythm of the music playing. Everything is okay.
until
RING.... RING..... James(Dr. Daniels) having his left arm in a sling, struggles
to answer the phone. Trying all sorts of things: Steering
with his forehead, his knees, not steering at all
JAMES
(into the phone)
This better be important
(beat)
Hello?
(beat)
Hello?
James shakes his head, and with his knees on the steering
wheel, he places the phone back in its cradle. He's got
this one handed phone thing down!
CUT TO: INT. '95 PEARL WHITE HONDA ACCORD -- -- MOMENTS LATER We are looking through a similar window, wipers dancing,
same music is playing on the radio.
Rebecca holds a small piece of paper in her hand while she
drives. She looks at her watch and its 7:55 p.m.
REBECCA
(looking at watch)
Damit! Marks going to kill me.
Rebecca looks at the small piece of paper which reads:
Kathy's: 7:45p.m. #27 W. Mapletown Road. Then looks out
the window, trying to see and address.
Rebecca wipes the condensation off the window and looks again.
However the street is very poorly lit and she can't see any
addresses.
Rebecca turns down the radio as if that's the problem then
looks again. Just then she spots #330 as she flies by at 40
mph.
REBECCA
(Frustrated)
He's gonna die
She picks up her Emergency Cell Phone and dials Marks cell
number 555-5274 then presses send.
REBECCA
(placing the phone to
her ear)
Oh...man
O.S. we hear the phone RING....RING.... CUT TO: INT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- MOMENTS LATER RING.... James gets one of those "Its one of those days"
kinda looks
JAMES
(Singing with music)
I'm not gonna answer it, I'm just
not gonna answer it, It's not gonna
happen.....Today
CUT TO: INT. '95 PEARL WHITE HONDA ACCORD -- -- MOMENTS LATER REBECCA
(singing with music)
Answer it, please...please just answer
it
Rebecca hangs up the phone and re-dials. As the phone once again RINGS, she glances at a street sign.
But she is going to fast and can't make it out.
CUT TO: EXT. JUST OUTSIDE REBECCAS CAR -- MOMENTS LATER Rebeccas car comes to an abrupt stop on the side of the road.
Rebecca wipes off the condensation off the inside of the
window and frantically looks through it trying to see any
sign of an address. She looks like a fish in a fish bowl
looking out.
Rebecca opens her door and steps out still looking for an
address, realizing that she is directly in front of Kathy's
house, she gives a sigh of relief.
Rebecca grabs her bag from the car, and notices a man leaving
the house. She runs over to intercept the very large, but
handsome man.
REBECCA
(To Mr. Martin)
Mr. Martin?
MR. MARTIN
(pleasant smile)
Guilty
(beat)
you must be Kathys teacher? I didn't
think you were gonna make it
REBECCA
(Shaking hand)
I'm so sorry I'm late
MR. MARTIN
lets step inside out of the rain,
Kathys been looking forward to seeing
you
Mr. Martin leads Rebecca into the house CUT TO: INT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- MOMENTS LATER The phone is still ringing, and James is still not answering
it. In fact he turns up the radio instead
JAMES
(singing)
I'm not going to answer it, I'm just
not gonna answer it
The phone STOPS ringing, and a BIG satisfied grin comes across
James face.
(Beat) The phone RINGS once again. A very serious but funny look
comes across his face.
CUT TO: EXT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- CONTINUOUS The vehicle swerves to the side of the road. Tires come to
a grinding halt on the gravel.
CUT TO: INT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- CONTINUOUS James abruptly undoes his seat belt, and grabs the phone.
This causes obvious pain.
JAMES
(Into Phone)
What the hell is so Freek'n Important?
SARAH (O.S.)
(Sweet loving voice)
Hi Sweetie, How you feeling?
JAMES
Damit Sarah , I would have been fine
if you hadn't called
SARAH (O.S.)
(Offended, or?)
Fine, call me when your feeling better
then
JAMES
(feeling stupid)
Sarah.......
(pause)
Sarah, I didn't mean it like
that...It's just,
(pause)
I about ran off the road trying to
answer the dam phone.
A moment of silence. Sarah is going to make him beg. JAMES
Sarah... I'm Sorry
Sarah has had her fun now SARAH (O.S.)
(energetic)
So, how ya doing? that scratch heal
yet?
JAMES
(annoyed)
Scratch, what do you mean scratch?
We realize at this point that Sarah LOVES yanking James chain. SARAH (O.S.)
Well...can't be any worse than one
of your patients. You cut them open
all the time
JAMES
(defensive)
Yeah, but they need it and most of
the time don't feel it, and I sure
as hell don't need this!
At this point Sarah is laughing hysterically, it sounds like
she is hyperventilating
JAMES
(annoyed)
I'm glad your enjoying yourself
SARAH (O.S.)
(trying not to laugh)
Well anyhow Dr. Pincushion, now that
you have all this time off. I EXPECT
to come see me.
JAMES
SEE YOU? I see you every day!
SARAH (O.S.)
(Serious)
Ya and that's all you ever do is SEE
me.
(beat-James rolls his
eyes)
You come home, you say hi, then you
goto bed. When was the last time we
had dinner together?
(beat)
Hmm?
(beat)
That's what I thought, So now that
your off for two weeks, I expect you
to spend some time with me.
James knows she right. He loves his work, but that's BESIDES
the point!
JAMES
How do you know how long I'll be
off? Are you checking up on me?
SARAH (O.S.)
(how dare he)
HEY, someone has to take care of
you!
JAMES
And that means SPYING on me?
SARAH (O.S.)
(very fast speaking)
SPYING!! I think not
(beat)
worried is more like it. And someone
has to look out for my BIG brother,
and until that changes I'LL BE RIGHT
HERE!
A few moments of silence to give James time to think about
what was just said, and Sarah time to gloat.
SARAH
(taking charge)
SO, I'm making dinner. It will be
done about 8:30, and I expect you to
be here.
JAMES
(conceding)
FINE, but only if your making moms
pizza specialty.
SARAH (O.S.)
Anything else?
JAMES
(taking advantage)
And you have to let me win at a game
of Monopoly.
SARAH (O.S.)
Anything else?
JAMES
(stumped)
Well, No.
SARAH (O.S.)
GREAT, see you shortly then..
JAMES
(false control)
FINE, I might be late though.
SARAH (O.S.)
(Upset)
And why is that?
JAMES
I'm going to go pick up a bottle of
De Chargre'
SARAH (O.S.)
Make it Le Tungrene and I'll forgive
ya.
JAMES
OH, good idea... See you shortly.
SARAH (O.S.)
Bye Sweety.
JAMES
(laughing)
Bye.
James is thinking that things are finally looking up, this
vacation is probably for the best. James hangs up the phone
and then pull away.
CUT TO: EXT. KATHYS FRONT PORCH -- MOMENTS LATER Rebecca and Mr. Martin are walking out the front door. Both
seeming very comfortable. The rain is still pouring down.
And it is obvious that both are in a hurry.
MR. MARTIN
(shaking hands)
Thank you Ms. Becky, it has been a
true pleasure.
REBECCA
(hurrying to car)
Well the pleasure is having Becky in
my class.
MR. MARTIN
(raised voice)
I look forward to the next Conference,
and I promise I'll make it next time.
REBECCA
(to Kathy)
Bye Kathy, see you tomorrow.
Kathy stands just inside the house behind a closed screen
door. Her grandmother stands beside her.
KATHY
Bye Ms. Becky, good-night.
REBECCA
(getting in car)
Good-Night Becky
(beat)
Good-Night Mr. Martin
MR. MARTIN
(getting in Truck)
Good-Night.
Rebecca closes her door and starts the vehicle up. CUT TO: INT. '95 PEARL WHITE HONDA ACCORD -- -- MOMENTS LATER Music is still playing on the radio. Rebecca looks at her
watch, Its 8:12p.m.
REBECCA
(to herself)
Sure I can make it six miles in three
minutes
CUT TO: INT. LIQUOR STORE -- MOMENTS LATER James is standing in a checkout line holding two bottles of
wine and waiting for the customer in front of him to complete
the sale. James rocks back on his heals then forward to his
toes. Back and forth, Back and forth....
CASHIER
(To customer)
Thank You, come again.
The customer nods his head, grabs his bag of alcohol and
leave the store.
CASHIER
(To James)
How ya doing tonight sir?
JAMES
(without
thought/smiling)
I'm doing really good thanks.
The cashier scans two bottles of wine and puts them in a
plain bag
CASHIER
Glad to hear that
(beat)
looks like the total is $47.58.
James reaches in his front pants pocket and grabs a $50,
placing it on the counter.
JAMES
Keep the change
James grabs the bag and walks towards the door. The cashier
looks at the Fifty and stutters a moment
CASHIER
(to James)
Wait, Wait
(beat)
I can't..
JAMES
(interrupting)
Give it to the next guy then
James walks out the door. CUT TO: EXT. LIQUOR STORE -- CONTINUOUS James rushes across the parking lot to his vehicle which is
backed into a parking stall. The rain seems to be falling
even harder now. James opens the door and jumps into his
vehicle. We here the phone RINGING!!
CUT TO: INT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- CONTINUOUS James sets the bag onto the passengers set and picks up the
phone.
JAMES
(into phone)
Hello?
James starts the car and puts it onto gear SARAH (O.S.)
Hey Sweetie!
JAMES
Sarah... what a surprise.. How long
was the phone ringing?
SARAH (O.S.)
Just a few minutes. Hey listen can
you get me a six pack while your at
the store?
JAMES
(Laughing)
You have impeccable timing, you know
that?
SARAH (O.S.)
(proud)
I know, see ya shortly dear
CLICK, a dial tone. James pulls the phone from his ear and
stares at the phone for several seconds then raises his eye
brows and shakes his head in total disbelief.
CUT TO: EXT. DARK ROAD -- MOMENTS LATER ANGLE ON Quiet wet road, silence fills the air. Just about the time
we wonder why we are here.. In the distance a vehicle can
be heard, then the reflection of the headlights can be seen
on the road. Soon, the vehicle passes by where only the
sound of wet tire against the road is heard.
CUT TO: INT. '95 PEARL WHITE HONDA ACCORD -- -- CONTINUOUS Rebecca is still trying to get a hold of Mark. She dials
again and gets the same old message:
MARK (O.S.)
(Recording)
Hello, this is Mark, I'm not available
so leave a message
REBECCA
(into phone)
Mark my love, I told you I would
call if I was going to be later than
expected. Well, It's
(beat, she looks at
her watch)
Um..8:16 and I'm just a couple of
minutes away, I know you don't want
to hear any excuses but this rain
hasn't helped. See you soon, bye
Rebecca goes to turn off the phone, but accidentally drops
it in her lap. She looks down, then looks up at the road.
She reaches down grabbing the phone and holds it up, glancing
at it then turns it off.
Rebecca puts the phone back in its cradle between the seats.
When rebecca looks up, we can tell that something is wrong
with her. Her eyes get wider.
CUT TO: INT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- NIGHT 8:14 We hear the same music that was playing in Rebeccas vehicle
just seconds ago. A BEAT goes by and the PHONE RINGS once
again.
JAMES
(to himself)
ARGG!!!!
Shaking his head, James gets a look of menace on his face. James puts his knees on the wheel and grabs the telephone
cord RIPPING it out of the phone.
RI.... The phone goes quiet. JAMES
(PSYCHOTICALLY)
HA!! HA!! HA!! HA!! HA!!
As James is laughing, the sound of Skidding wet tires catches
his attention. James looks to his right and sees Rebeccas
car sliding out of control towards him.
James has no time to react. The two vehicle collide. The Honda Accords drivers front side collides with the BMW
passengers front, sending the Accord rolling several times
before coming to a standstill against a street light. Behind
the car is a very large oak tree, with its branches shielding
the car from rain
CAMERA ANGLE changes several times. Everything is in slow motion.
Vehicles collide with great impact, very loud.. Then SILENCE
as the vehicles come to a standstill.
DISSOLVE TO: INT. LARGE BANQUET HALL -- NIGHT ROBERT(Mr. Wilcox) stand at a podium in front of a large
group of teaching professionals. Atop the podium is a large
plaque. Robert taps on the microphone atop the podium, a
loud THUMP THUMP and FEEDBACK can be heard throughout the
hall.
ROBERT
(into mic)
WOW...First I would like to thank
you all for coming here tonight. We
all know what a honor it is to receive
an award that represents teaching at
its best.
(holding up)
I think this plaque represents
perfection and excellence. In this
instance it shows one persons belief
in the impact of her teaching.
(putting down plaque)
I've never known anyone who goes out
of there way like Ms. Rebecca Downs
has been know to do.
(chuckling)
As a matter of fact, tonight is a
good example. I'm sure you all know
that parent teacher conferences where
tonight. And although she is
receiving this award, she went out
of her way to visit a parent that
was unable to make it to the school.
(pause)
Now she didn't go to this students
house because she thought it was
necessary to meet with this particular
parent, she went there because she
believes it is important to meet
with EVERY parent!
Entire hall fills with the sound of applause. One by one
Robert's piers stand in agreement. Robert's got that much
out, now what... Where is she?
CUT TO: EXT. ACCIDENT INTERSECTION -- NIGHT Rebeccas' honda accord lays on it's side facing south, pinning
the passengers side door against the cold ground. The entire
car has been crushed or mangled in some way. All the windows
are smashed or broken out.
James BMW faces north, its passengers side front fender has
been ripped off. The hood has been peeled like a sardine
can lid. Glass and plastic cover the road between the two
vehicles.
STILL CAM moves to James car. James sits in his car, only because the
seat belt holds him there. His window is broken out, while
the windshield is smashed due to the impact. The SOUND of
RAIN is the only noise.
INT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- NIGHT Upon closer examination we can see that James' head is gushing
blood above his left eyebrow. James has been still until
now, he is starting to come to. He lifts his head up and
looks around. James wipes the blood from his forehead and
eye. But that doesn't do any good. James looks in the rear
view mirror, leaning over to check his wound out. As he
turns his head, he cringes with pain, grabbing his left
shoulder. James looks at the stab wound that has ripped
open, blood has soaked through his shirt and now drips from
his elbow.
Its obvious that James is still shaken up. He has yet to
notice the other vehicle let alone look for it.
James reaches behind him and grabs a dress shirt that hangs
from a hook in the back seat. He uses the shirt to wipe
away the blood from his face and then presses the bloody rag
against the wound.
James pauses for a moment then out of nowhere looks over at
the overturned Honda. James immediately throws the rag out
the window and tries to open the door. He reaches over and
unlocks the door and tries again, but it has been jammed
closed due to the accident.
James is not thinking clearly, he tries to muscle the door
open with his shoulder. Leaving an imprint of blood on the
door.
JAMES
(Screaming in pain)
OH GOD!!
(Whimpering)
Blood begins to once again run down his face. Out of instinct
he wipes the blood from his brow.
James reaches across to the passengers door, but it too is
jammed shut. Frustrated, James grabs hold of the steering
wheel, positions his body to kick the drivers door. James
successfully opens the door after several strong blows to
the inside of the door.
EXT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- NIGHT James painfully pulls himself out of the vehicle and stumbles
through the rain to Rebeccas vehicle. James shields his
face from the pouring rain, as he makes his way.
JAMES
Hello, Everyone okay in there
(Pause)
HELLO!!
Yelling, James stumbles around to the front on the vehicle.
Inside James sees a Rebecca huddled up on top of the
passengers door. The windshield is pretty smashed, and
partially hanging outside the frame. James immediately
grabs the hanging flap and pulls, but it just binds up and
will no longer give. James walks around the vehicle and
sees no other entry point. James comes back to the windshield
and kicks it furiously several times then pulls again until
it comes all the way out.
INT. '95 PEARL WHITE HONDA ACCORD -- -- CONTINUOUS Rebecca is still lying on top of the door, with her feet
tucked behind her body. Rebeccas head is now lying on the
wet pavement and her face is starting to turn black and blue.
JAMES
(Realizing her
condition)
Damit!
(beat)
Where ever you where going couldn't
have been this important
James reaches under Rebeccas arm and pulls her out. James
manages to get her under the leaves of the tree, where the
ground is mostly dry.
James begins to look Rebecca over. Checking her pulse. JAMES
C'mon Babe, why's your pulse so slow?
Placing his head on her chest, James realizes that she is
not breathing. Using his teeth and right hand, he rips the
front of her dress open from the top down to her stomach,
leaving only a black lace bra to cover her.
JAMES
Sorry but this is necessary.
James places his ear against her bare chest again. He listens
for several seconds then opens her mouth and looks inside.
Shaking his head James jumps up and hobbles back to his
vehicle.
INT. '97 PEARL WHITE BMW 325I -- NIGHT James reaches in the front door with his right hand and
unlocks the drivers rear door. He then opens the rear door
and grabs his medical bag.
EXT. '95 PEARL WHITE HONDA ACCORD -- -- NIGHT James makes his way back to Rebecca. Kneeling next to her
upper body. James feels the front of her neck with his
fingers. He then reaches into his medical bag and finds a
new packaged syringe. He uses his mouth to rip open the
package and pulls out the sterile syringe. He then bites
the plunger and pulls it out of the tube, then does the
same with the needle.
James reaches inside the bag and pulls out a scouple. He
tries to use just one hand to cut the needle end of the
syringe off, but there is just no way.
James looks down and sees his bloody left hand. Without
much choice he painfully wipes it off on his pants. He then
places the syringe in the still bloody hand and cuts the
small end off to make a tube. He places the tube between
his teeth.
Holding the tube in his teeth, he uses the scouple to perform
a tracheotomy on Rebecca. Once the cut is complete, James
watches a drop of blood land on Rebeccas chest. James leans
back then grabs the tube from his mouth.
The tube has a bead of blood running down the side. James
places the tube on Rebeccas chest and fumbles through the
bag.
JAMES
SHIT!
He then focuses his attention back to the tube. He picks up
the tube and wipes it off on Rebeccas dress. Looking at it
carefully, he places the unsanitized tube into the hole in
Rebeccas neck.
James then reaches inside his bag and grabs his stethoscope
and listens to her chest. James wipes off his brow again,
this time with his forearm, while his other arm still drips
with blood. James is loosing alot of blood.
JAMES
C'mon now, I know you didn't like
that, but it will do the job, so
lets go.
James listens for several seconds.. Then he blows into the
tube once, then listens. almost immediately a slight hiss
can be heard...
JAMES
Good girl, now lets see what else is
going on here.
James leans over her and inspects the very large cut along
her forehead. He reaches down and rips a piece of cloth
from her dress and presses against the wound.
After a few second James pull the cloth away and the blood
gushes out of the open wound. James quickly replaces the
cloth.
JAMES
Hang in there kiddo.
James gets up and runs to his vehicle. James has caught his
second wind. About half way to the car he stumbles and falls
to the ground.
Staggering to his feel he gets back to his vehicle and from
out of the back seat he pulls a full trash bag. James tosses
the bag on the ground, then sits down on the front seat and
grabs his cellular phone. Dialing 911, he realizes that its
been ripped out of the base by a mad man.
JAMES
(Stomping)
SHIT, SHIT, SHIT, SHIT, Smart move
James Michael Anderson, Smart move..
James gets out of the vehicle, grabs the trash bag and runs
back to Rebecca. He rips open the bag with his teeth and
clothes fall to ground next to Rebecca.
JAMES
Lets get you warmed up, I don't know
how long it will be before someone
find us.
James spreads the clothing over her, placing a bundle under
her feel. James then sits next to her and uses one of the
socks to wipe her face off. After a moment the Sock is soaked
through with blood. James grabs a cotton shirt and places
it over the wound.
JAMES
(Smiling)
Don't worry, I these are the clean
ones.
(questioning)
I think....
James holds the shirt in place for a moment then looks down
stretching his neck, he notices the blood dripping from his
elbow. James grabs a pair of short and places them under
the shoulder strap of the sling.
James turns his focus almost immediately back to Rebecca,
holding his hand on the shirt over her head.
JAMES
(looking over her)
Sorry about the dress, if anyone
asks I'll tell them how beautiful
you looked in it
(smiling)
Your gonna be okay, I promise.
(shaking head)
If I just hadn't gotten so angry I
could of used my cell to call for
help
(smiling again)
but someone will drive by any minute,
I just know it.
Just then the phone RINGS. James looks up JAMES
(surprised)
My phone.
James jumps up and runs towards his vehicle, then stops, the
ringing isn't coming from his car.
INT. '95 PEARL WHITE HONDA ACCORD -- -- NIGHT Rebeccas phone is resting on the floorboard next to the gas
peddle.
RING (pause) RING James looks into the vehicle and waits for another ring.. RING James grabs the phone and presses SEND, answering the phone JAMES
Hello
(Pause)
HELLO!!
ROBERT (O.S.)
(Questioningly)
Who is this?
JAMES
(frantically)
I'm sorry, there has been an accident.
I need help
(looking around)
I'm at Creek Road and Highland.
Will you please send the paramedics?
Hurry!
James walks back over to Rebecca ROBERT (O.S.)
(Scared)
Is Rebecca there? Is she alright?
JAMES
She'll okay, but I need help here
quickly, so please hurry!
ROBERT (O.S.)
Okay. Creek and Highland? I'll be
right there.
JAMES
NO! send the paramedics, tell them
to send a helicopter, tell them to
send LIFE FLIGHT, I'm a doctor, tell
them there is a doctor here, and we
need LIFE FLIGHT.
CUT TO: INT. LARGE BANQUET HALL -- CONTINUOUS Robert stands behind a large black curtain behind the stage. ROBERT
(Panic)
Okay. Okay.
JAMES (O.S.)
Thank You.
Robert stands there in shock. A MAN stands next to him with
a shot of brandy in a small plastic cup.
MAN
Robert?
(beat)
Robert? is everything okay?
ROBERT
(In Shock)
No... No... Rebeccas been in an
accident
MAN
(Shocked)
Good God!, Is she alright
ROBERT
(dialing)
I...I don't know. I need to call
the paramedics.
CUT TO: EXT. ACCIDENT INTERSECTION -- CONTINUOUS James is sitting down next to Rebecca. James examines himself
again. His Shoulder is still pouring out blood, and his
face has actually stopped bleeding for the moment.
JAMES
So, your Rebecca. It's nice to meet
you. Although I wish it was on better
circumstances.
James looks at rebecca and realizes something is wrong. He
grabs his stethoscope and listens to her chest.
JAMES
Damit! You gotta keep fighting.
James begins one handed CPR. The faster he pumps the more
blood that gushes from his elbow. He listens to her chest
again, but her condition hasn't improved.
JAMES
Help is on its way Rebecca.. Just
fight for a few more minutes
James starts CPR again, then stops and listens to her chest
again.
JAMES
(Smiling)
Hang in there, just a few more minutes
James looks very flush. He blinks several times. He is
about to go unconscious due to the lose of blood. James
stagers to his feet and takes two steps back and falls flat
on his butt.
The sounds of sirens can be heard in the distance. JAMES
(Mumbling)
Hold on... Rebecca Hold on.
P.O.V. JAMES -- CONTINUOUS Looking at Rebecca all is going blurry. The reflection of
red and blue light can be seen on the ground and the Honda.
An EMT kneels down next to James and another can be seen
running over to Rebecca.
EMT #1
Doctor? Are you okay?
EMT #3
This girls almost gone. Get.....
FADE OUT: INT. JAMES' RECOVERY ROOM -- DAY James lays asleep on the hospital bed. SARAH sits next to
him, reading a book.
Sarah is a beautiful 26 year old brunet. She sit all twisted
up in an end chair reading a book. However misleading he
position, she is very comfortable.
Focus On a young black male ORDERLY enters the room. He carried a
covered tray of food.
ORDERLY
(to Sarah)
How's our man doin?
SARAH
Still sleeping
ORDERLY
Well do want me to wake him? or do
you want the honor?
SARAH
(Devilish smile)
Oh, let me.
Sarah reaches over and slowly runs her fingernails around
his neck and over his face. James lashes his head from side
to side trying to get away from the torture. James eyes
open.
JAMES
Sarah!
James looks around, a bit confused, but everything comes
rushing back to him.
JAMES
(Concerned, to orderly)
How is Rebecca? Is she okay, did
she make it?
SARAH
Settle down she's fine, she is just
a few rooms down.
JAMES
(to Orderly)
Please get me Dr. Manchester. NOW!
ORDERLY
It will be my pleasure, but first
you must eat some fine home cooking.
You can't stay on an IV forever.
And besides I've already had a slice
of the apple pie
(removing cover to
food)
It was delicious. All it was missing
was mama herself dishing it out.
And a few of daddy's jokes and it
would of been just like being home
again.
James frustration is climbing JAMES
Ryan! please.
RYAN
Okay Dr. Daniels, but you better eat
everything on that plate by the time
I return.
(CHEEZY SMILE)
Ryan turns and leaves the room. FOCUS ON Sarah grabs the apple pie and a fork from the tray and
proceeds to eat. James just lets it go...
SARAH
(mouth full)
So, a little late huh?
JAMES
It's not like I planned it
SARAH
Yeah I made Will show me the lady,
I'm still not One Hundred percent
convinced.
JAMES
How is she?
SARAH
You saved her life.
James stares blankly at the ceiling. SARAH
You sure know how to pick'em
JAMES
What?
SARAH
Rebecca, she's really hot.
(beat)
Even after you ran over her
JAMES
Sarah! I didn't run over her.
James goes back into trance SARAH
I don't believe it. How long has it
been? Seven years? No wait its
been Eight Years, Lisa Smith.
JAMES
What are you talking about? Just go
away.
SARAH
Not on your life. Its been Eight
years since my big brother has been
in love, No WAY your gonna get rid
of me..
JAMES
Don't be ridiculous, I've never even
talked to her. She's just another
patient as far as I'm concerned.
SARAH
So its a case of the Florence
Nightengale?
JAMES
Sarah! Yes I think she is beautiful.
And maybe under different
circumstances there might have been
a small chance. But she's never
even seen me. And....
SARAH
(interrupting)
That's where your wrong.
JAMES
Wrong about what?
SARAH
She has seen you. About two hours
ago.
JAMES
What are you talking about?
SARAH
I told you I've seen her didn't I?
Well she wanted to see who it was
that saver her life.
JAMES
Really? What did she say?
SARAH
She said you where exactly as she
imagined, she said that you so strong
and handsome looking and that you
where her night in shinning armor
JAMES
Really?
SARAH
I had to hold her back from taking
you right here.
HOOK line and sinker. James has been taken for a fool once
again.
JAMES
Do you do this for some sadistic
reason?
SARAH
I just wanted to see how genuine the
feelings are
JAMES
So did she really come in here?
SARAH
Yeah, against Wills wishes.
ANGLE ON Dr. William Manchester enters the room DR. MANCHESTER
How you doing James?
JAMES
I'm fine, how's my patient? Did the
Trake hold?
DR. MANCHESTER
Paramedics didn't expect her to make
it here. It took Doctors Mathew's
and Iverson six hours to stabilize
her.
JAMES
Is she out of Critical?
DR. MANCHESTER
Oh yes, She still listed in stable
condition, but other than a few
stitches I think she'll be leaving
tomorrow
JAMES
She's was fighter last night.
DR. MANCHESTER
She came to see you know?
JAMES
Yeah, Sarah told me
Dr. Manchester walks around the other side of the bed. A
serious look comes over his face. He wants to talk some
serious shop.
DR. MANCHESTER
James, I need to talk with you
privately. Sarah, would you mind
stepping outside for a minute?
SARAH
Sure, I'll just go bug the Janitor.
JAMES
Sarah, wait just a moment.
(to Manchester)
Will, what is this concerning? I
think I would like Sarah to stay
DR. MANCHESTER
I got the lab report yesterday.
JAMES
From the gang incident
DR. MANCHESTER
Yes
(beat)
and the news was not good. The boy
that stabbed you was H.I.V Positive.
James face goes completely blank. Sarah looks at James then
over at Manchester.
DR. MANCHESTER
I spoke with his family, there
telling me he got advanced A.I.D.S,
they don't expected him to live more
than a few months.
SARAH
What does this mean? Could he have
infected you?
James is way ahead of her on this one. He stares at Sarah,
without response.
DR. MANCHESTER
James, I also received the report of
the accident last night.
FOCUS ON James face is very flush. He is scared, he look timidly at
Sarah
JAMES
Oh, my god. I didn't know. How
could I have known?
DR. MANCHESTER
Now James, don't jump to any
conclusions.
SARAH
(confused)
Know what? What are you talking
about. JAMES!
DR. MANCHESTER
The knife was covered with infected
blood from the young man.
JAMES
There's a good chance that when I
was stabbed... I contracted H.I.V.
James struggles to get through the next part JAMES
Last night.... Things happened so
fast, Oh my god... How could I let
this happen...
DR. MANCHESTER
And she needs to know.
SARAH
I don't understand? A.I.D.S. doesn't
spread that quickly.
DR. MANCHESTER
A person can be a carrier and never
show a symptom. Were not sure how
fast the disease spreads, that's why
we need to take precautions now.
JAMES
I will tell her
DR. MANCHESTER
The hell you will. This is a hospital
matter now, The Board of......
JAMES
(INTERRUPTING)
If I infected her, she needs to know
from me. I wasn't working when this
happened. My job and my place of
employment are no concern in this,
besides you put me on a leave of
absence REMEMBER!
DR. MANCHESTER
(sarcastically)
I thought you would see it my way.
Turning to walk out DR. MANCHESTER
James, I'm sorry, we'll face this
together.
(beat)
Please inform Ms. Downs today.
DR. MANCHESTER
Take care Sarah.
Manchester leaves the room. CUT TO: INT. BECKY'S RECOVERY ROOM -- DAY Mark and Becky are in mid discussion. Becky looks
surprisingly well, even with all the stitches and bandages
on her. Mark is standing next to her bed.
Flowers and balloons crowd the nearby table. It looks like
a typical hospital room.
REBECCA
So how did it go?
MARK
(chuckling)
Well it' the closest I'll ever get
to teacher of the year.
REBECCA
Your a great teacher, besides I'll
bet everyone of your students would
vote for you.
MARK
(laughing)
They'd better.
O.S. A knock on the door ANGLE ON James pokes his head through the open door JAMES
Hello, may I come in?
REBECCA
Dr. Daniels, please come in.
REBECCA
(to Mark)
Mark, Dr. Daniels. Dr. Daniels this
is my fiancée Mark Wilcox.
DR. DANIELS
Please call me James
The two men exchange handshakes JAMES
We spoke on the phone
MARK
Doctor, Thank you so much for saving
the love of my life.
James is very uneasy. As is Rebecca. JAMES
How are you feeling?
REBECCA
I'm doing good all things considered
JAMES
I was really worried about ya. We
had some struggles there for awhile
REBECCA
They told me that if had been anyone
else besides you, I never would of
made it.
JAMES
(grabbing his throat)
Sorry about the....
REBECCA
Yeah, It's a little sore.
James walks over to the opposite of the bed that Mark stands
on.
JAMES
Miss ?, I need to speak with you
privately.... about last night.
REBECCA
Is there a problem?
(beat)
If there is I would like Mark to
stay.
JAMES
This is a very private matter. I
would suggest that he step outside
for just a moment.
REBECCA
Doctor Daniels please just tell me
what it is
James struggles but proceeds FADE OUT: INT. JAMES' RECOVERY ROOM -- EVENING James and Sarah are talking. James is sitting up in his bed
and Sarah sits at the end of his bed.
SARAH
(teary)
When William said it, I pictured him
telling me.
(beat)
I was so scared.
(beat)
I must of thought about it a thousand
times.
JAMES
You've probably got less of a chance
than most.
(worried)
Is there something your not telling
me? Have you been doing something
that would put you at risk.
SARAH
No, no.... Its just that I..... I've
been around.
(beat)
I DON'T KNOW...
JAMES
How around?
SARAH
(sarcastically)
Well not the entire Utah Starzz.
JAMES
(laughing)
Well you still have a far less
significant chance of contracting
H.I.V. from another woman than I do.
SARAH
Still, I've thought about it so many
times, and you don't deserve it.
All you have ever want to do is help
people. Why you?
JAMES
Why anyone?
CAMERA PUSHES IN ON Sarah hugs James. CUT TO:
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